my two cents jeannie,

the eyebrow should be longer, straighter towards the end. kind of like a smooth "he" in hiragana. right now, it's exactly the same shape and length as her eyes. a bit like a double arch...the tip of each eyebrow should ideally produce a triangle between the tip of the nose, and the two ends of the eyebrow. she has quite a tall forehead, so why not give her bangs that swoop from one side to the ear? a bit darker around the eyes might make her eyes look bigger too. i don't know if it's the lighting, but she looks very dark in picture 2. it makes her lip colour very red... not a pinkish young looking red, but an old sober red.bangs. u have to give her bangs. the forehead's driving me crazy.